Friday, November 14, 2014

#200 From Interesting Premise To Vision

In my last post I mention aspiring writers beginning with an interesting premise and then bogging down in the writing process, potentially due to a lack in an overall vision.  What's the difference between an interesting premise and a vision?  That's a good question.  My definitions are as follows:

Interesting Premise:  An idea.  A spark.  An example might be, "Let's write a movie about a plant that eats people.

Vision:  The idea grows and takes shape that includes developed characters, key plot points, established conflict and resolution.  A complete fire.  An example might be, "Let's write a musical that follows a lonely plant store employee who discovers a mysterious plant from outer space.  He discovers, to his horror, that the plant drinks blood.  He begins feeding it his own blood, but eventually commits murder to keep his plant alive.  As the plant grows, its need for blood increases until it grows too large for the plant store guy to control.  There will be a love story, a wicked boyfriend, the best Bill Murray cameo in history, and many catchy songs that people will love.  At the end of the movie, the plant spawns baby blood suckers and it is up to the plant store guy to destroy them all.  Or planet Earth is doomed.

So how can an aspiring writer get from an Interesting Premise to a Vision?  What are the magical steps needed to take a spark of an idea and make it flourish into a well developed fire?  Following are things that I do to help flesh out my ideas.


  • Understand Your Genre
    • What are the basic conventions of the genre?
    • How does your story conform to the conventions?  How does it break convention?
    • Does your story cross genres?
    • How does your story differ from other stories in the genre?
  • Understand Your Characters
    • I use sticky notes and brainstorm how each character would react in mundane/unrelated situations.  Like, 
      • What would she do if she showed up to work late to avoid trouble?
      • What's the last thing she does before going to bed?
      • Where would she eat lunch on her birthday?
      • And many more...
    • Think about the relationships between your characters.  Do you see similar relationships in real life?
    • Print pics of your characters.  Can use advertisements or your FB friends.  Be careful using FB friends.
    • Understand primary character arc- how does she grow/change?
  • Understand Primary and Secondary Conflicts
    • Without conflict, your readers will tire of reading.
    • Think of conflict in terms of origin and resolution.
    • Trace the overall vision in terms of conflict.  The story should move forward and make sense.
  • Find Your Climax
    • What is the story building to?  You must know this so that you know where you are leading the reader.  This will allow you to make decisions on how best to develop the story throughout.
    • How will you get to the climax from the beginning?  What key elements are necessary along the way?
If you have any thoughts to add, by all means, leave them in the comments.  Any information is good when helping a writer turn an interesting premise into a fleshed out vision.

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