Editing book 2 now and things are coming along swimmingly. Except for one thing. I wrote some version of the following phrase 6 times in this book: "They stopped in their tracks." I do not say this phrase and do not know why I have been writing it. Makes me feel like I am writing in the 19th century or something. So, today I searched out all of these phrases and replaced them with something much cooler. Like: "They froze."
I'd say that was a good day of writing!
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